I caught myself
Daydreaming
About a daydream
A daring deceit in itself
Chains of thought
That move like snakes
Elegant though dangerous
Flit at the fringe of proper
My winding mind spilling forth
Through day and then night
Consumed and distracted
Tumbles into unconsciousness
In an unguarded landscape
Where freedom reigns
I find you, always you
My unrequited love waiting
To make real every dream
5 Crazy Facts About Daydreaming
Weekly Theme:
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Originally Published:
02/06/2019
💜 The NOW!!! This a Beautiful Poem and what “David Mitchell” Does EveryOne; let that Sink In Before YOUR!!! Comments on My Reply EveryBody
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Kind of you to say. I read cloud Atlas earlier this year. A grand sweeping novel that left my head spinning. To be linked to the author in any way is quite the honour 💚
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Such a beautiful poem. Can’t wait to hear your snake comments as I posted one yesterday and it was all about the snake.. lol 💖😂
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Thank you. I’ll pop over to take a look as soon as I can ☺️💚
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A beautiful poem, indeed👏🏼😄
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Thank you so much ☺️
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Beautiful poetry
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Thanks, Goddess.
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Daydreaming about daydreaming is an interesting challenge … and you met it well. The ending was a pleasant surprise.
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Thank you. I remember writing this one. It was a free flowing write. I chose the words by sound so the ending was even a surprise to me.
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Absolutely fascinating and liberating in its own way!
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Thank you. I thought this had something.
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Love the “Chains of thought / That move like snakes” Great work!
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Thank you. I was working on imagery at the time.
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Great poem and I did like the 5 facts about daydreaming. Though I take exception to the last one. Now that I’m retired I have given myself permission to daydream and I do it much more frequently!! My creativity has soared!
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Thank you.
I thought they were interesting facts too.
I was curious about that last one. I used to work in a nursing home and I would often see the residents staring off for great lengths. Even if they were reminiscing or contemplating majority of that time there was still plenty left for daydreaming.
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Enjoyed reading it 🥰
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Thank you for reading 💚
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