I pray you were able
to have a good night’s rest
and are feeling your best,
you know you should
I congratulate you
on waking up today.
Not everybody may
be so lucky
Abhanga: “the completion” is a stanzaic form commonly used for devotional, cynicism, satire and reflective moods. It was popular from the 13th through to the 17th century, in the Marathi Region of India.
The Abhanga is:
Written in any number of quatrain.
6/6/6/4 syllables per line.
The second and third line rhyme.
Often internal rhyme is employed.
I like! And I feel lucky I woke up today too. It’s going up to 15C potentially. Light, sun, something to be thankful for.
Have a great day,
eden
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Thank you.
We had a foot deep blanket of snow and minus 17 here. The sunshine is beautiful reflecting off the fresh snow.
Looks like a great day.
Have a good one,
mouse
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Oh the second verse has a punch of sarcasm and cynicism. 😉 I like it and good job using the form. 🙂💙
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Thank you. I use so much sarcasm. Sometimes I think people miss it.
I’m still waiting for the sarcasm button/font to be added to keyboards 🤣💚
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😂 @ button/font
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Beautifully penned. 🤝
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Thank you 😊💚
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Always fun to learn a new form of poetry!
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I agree. I try to write between 5 and 10 new forms a month.
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Relatable….
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Inspiring second verse my friend – both in form and in meaning 🖤🖤
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My little jab at those who say they aren’t morning people 😉💚
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👍🖤
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As a friend says, walking up on the right side of the grass is a good thing. As I used to tell students on Mondays – waking up on Saturday, Sunday, and Monday make a good weekend.
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As apposed to being buried alive.
That’s a great way to start a Monday. I’m guessing the comment received a few sour responses.
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Now I’m itching to give this form a whirl… since the internal rhyme isn’t mandatory!
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I tried the internal rhyme but it made the flow to choppy.
I’ll keep an eye out for your abhanga 😉
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Interesting!
Thank you for teaching me a new form of poetry!
stay safe,
-s.
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Thank you.
Mostly, I do this for the practice. If a few readers find these more obscure forms interesting then I am happy.
Enjoy the rest of your week,
mouse
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Thanks, mouse: you, too!
Avoid the Cat!
🙂
-s.
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Always watching 😉
~🐀
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And the poetry lessons continue with this gem. Thanks Mouse 👍
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Most welcome. I hope I’m not overdoing it. Few weeks off after the Indian forms 😉
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Oh, so you are human. Good to know, good to know.
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That question has been asked of me a few times, secrets 😉
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