And so it is our day of toil
our hands, the soil
where sweat let run
under the sun
In work, digress, settle downstream
earthbound, I dream
thoughts in dire need
desire to bleed
I tire, withdraw, let slip my mind
a place I find
to rest my head
flower the bed
The minute poem.
The rules are simple:
3 quatrains (or 4-line stanzas)
8 syllables in the first line of each stanza
4 syllables in the remaining lines of each stanza
rhyme scheme: aabb/ccdd/eeff
written in iambic meter
The term, "Garden bed," has been used by the English since at least AD 1000.
My Flower
As the rain falls
The garden calls
I see you, flower
You glisten, wet
Perky leaves set
Your petals cower
I am stilled through
just watching you
In the shower
The rhupunt:
The form can be broken down into lines or stanzas
Each line or stanza contains 3 to 5 sections
Each section has 4 syllables
All but the final section rhyme with each other
The final section of each line or stanza rhymes with the final section of the other lines or stanzas.
Weekly Theme:
Random Poetry Forms
Far too complicated for a black labrador! I enjoyed the read and the education though. Fair play to you for tackling it.
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I don’t think so. I’m sure if you attempted it you would outshine me easily. So thank you for not competing 🤣
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🤣 You are very welcome my friend.
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Tricky! This (Rhupunt) is a Twist in my tail that I’m not quite ready to tackle! You, however obviously could twist your mind (and tail) around it with flair!! You managed both forms with grace! I enjoyed your verses today!
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Thank you so much.
I guess it’s one for the list to try later 😉
I can’t help myself. The day I stop twisting is the day this site ceases to exist. I don’t see that happening anytime soon.
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I enjoyed reading this on a cold November day. It reminded me the spring flowers will come again. Thank you.
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.
Fleeting thoughts as I watch everything turn grey here in Finland.
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I love the flow of this one
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.
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