come
whale song
sing
your tones
from the depths
to rise
pitch
and repeat
make me feel
long distance love
echoing
within
all
sharing
harmony
to calm
the
restless
sea
Waltz Wave: Developed by Leo Waltz, it is a syllabic form with a title and 19 lines. The subject should be calming. The syllabic pattern is: 1/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/3/4/3/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/1.
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Lovely.
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Thanks, Raven
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This post is awesome. I lke flow of this style.
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Thank you. It’s a great form.
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Wonderfully done!
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Thanks!
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My pleasure.
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well done, whales are indeed gentle giants!
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Can’t go wrong with whales 😊
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never, we’ve seen heaps this year …
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That’s a good sign.
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the numbers seem to be increasing each year!
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That makes me happy and hopeful.
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Very lovely poem written with nice lines 🌷👌🙏♥️🌷
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Thank you very much 😊💚
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Great post. A whale of a poem! 👏
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Thanks. Came to me like a wave 👍
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😂
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A wonderful poem, Twisty, that dances in the depths of the oceans. 😊💙🐋
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Thanks, bluey. Glad I could convey depth with so little 😊💚
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You’re welcome. 🙂💙
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I love whale songs and this poem is delightful in every single line and syllable!
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Thank you. It was difficult regarding word choice.
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It’s beautiful
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Thanks 😊
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Awesome. To continue
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