Here, this place like any other
an unknown forest, I fear not
I take rest, unshoulder my lot
and await my future lover
My life, to join with another
to communicate beyond sound
beyond the thorned brambles aground
and hidden from sight of reproach
Now, I see my beauty approach
this place becomes our sacred ground
The Espinela is a Spanish poetic form with two stanzas and four end rhymes across 10 lines. It’s named after poet Vincente Espinel, who is credited with inventing it.
First stanza has four lines.
Second stanza has six lines.
Eight syllables per line.
Rhyme scheme is abba/accddc.
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Untried Poetry Forms
Wow amazing 🎉
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Thank you
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Beautifully done, Twisty. 🙂💙
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Thanks, bluey 😊💚
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I enjoyed this style of poetry. Thank you for sharing.
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So do I. Thanks for reading.
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Well tackled Mouse, and what a stunning photo.👍
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Thanks. It really jumps out at you 👍
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Awww 🖤🖤🖤
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💚💚💚
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Interesting poetic form and a provocative deviation in tone. Well done!
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Thank you. I throw these in every now and again to test myself. Don’t want to become a one trick pony.
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You’re welcome and that’s sound thinking. Good to take ourselves outside of our comfort zones from time to time.
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Exactly. Most these odd poetry forms are simply exercise. I see so many write the same thing every day. I don’t know how they continue to do it.
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Nice form, your verse makes me want to try it.
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Thank you. I look forward to seeing what you come up with 😉
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Will tag you when I write! (You have been warned!😉)
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Fairly warned 😉
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I’m not surprised that this one is in the untried pile. It is also in my “I should really give it a go” pile of forms. Now I’m thinking that I should wait a long time as your effort has made too much of an impression! A love poem – of a serious nature and it is so very good! I hope you will do some more of the longer forms!!
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Thank you. Recently I’ve been stealing minutes here and there to write. Longer forms are out of reach for now. One more reason for the cut back, I will have more freedom in content.
I’m sure your effort will be wonderful. You have a much more passionate touch than I do. A natural flow which makes the reading more pleasant than my clunky verses.
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Lovely photo, but I can’t help wondering where you’re supposed to walk.
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I wondered the same thing. Wish I could find out where this is so I could ask.
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Beautiful picture…soothing words👍
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Thank you 👍
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