Who looks outside, dreams;
Carl Jung
who looks inside, awakes
invitations challenge airs
declinations spurn
reprimands from the stars
gifted is the sky
accepting battles and trysts
where heavenly bodies unite
There are 9,096 stars visible to the naked eye in the entire sky.
she waits in dreamtime
parched
her features sallow
the rainbow serpent slithers
rivers run
she drinks deeply
The Rainbow Serpent or Rainbow Snake is a common deity often seen as a creator god, by Australian Aboriginals.
careful as the sea
travel by darkness
on endless waves
thundering at midnight
a splash of moonlight
wakes the horizon
Cherita:
The Cherita is named from the Malay word for story. It is a poem consisting of 3 stanzas. The first stanza is a single line. The second is a couplet and the third is a tercet. The line lengths are at the poet’s discretion. It is untitled, centred on the page, and has no requirement to rhyme since it is modelled on the haiku/tanka.
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All your Cheritas are really good. But that last one is my favorite – don’t know why but it speaks to me!!
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Thank you. I rewrote that one a few times. It was worth it for the end result.
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Good ones!
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Thank you ☺️
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My pleasure. 😊
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That photo!! ❤️❤️
(And your verses too, obvs 😉) 🖤
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I know!
I’ve been in this country for a decade and still yet to see the northern lights in person 💚
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Oh, you NEED to see it!! Especially where you are 👍🖤
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I think because I’m so close I haven’t gone 🤔 one day, hopefully sooner rather than later 💚
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I hope so!! 🤞😊🖤
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👍
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Love this, your beautiful poems and the picture! 🙏💕
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Thank you. It really came together in the end ☺️💚
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😊💕
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the last ones was really good.
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Thank you ☺️
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I am going to have to let my eyes get naked. Clearly I am missing so much. Great post.
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🤣 naked eye, a saucy figure of speech.
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Good to know about the Rainbow Serpent. The (Buddhist) magazine, Tricycle, has a monthly haiku challenge and this month’s challenge response must include the word ‘snake’ or ‘serpent’. I will look this up and as I have only one more day to submit it, maybe I can come up with another haiku for the challenge. I learn so much from you, Mouse. 🙂
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Being Australian, I grew up with the rainbow serpent mythology. It always fascinated me.
So I pass on the fascination 😊
Sounds like a fun challenge. Good luck.
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Love this!
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Thank you ☺️
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Absolutely beautiful! ❤
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Thank you 😊
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