Set your course by the stars, not by the lights of every passing ship.
Omar N. Bradley
A door framed
In the desert
Open
The sands pass
Nothing more
What mother takes
Of a sunny disposition
is returned
In the thaw
A little
wrong
is still
mostly
right
pass (v.)
late 13c., passen (transitive), “to go by (something),” also “to cross over,” from Old French passer “to pass” (11c.), from Vulgar Latin *passare “to step, walk, pass”
Call me through the veil
I will walk in my sleep
To find you
A tilted town
Jilted by progress
Yearning for bigger lights
Fades
Fades
Lost
And never found
We pass
In the hall
Figures
In fortitude
Our
Eyes meet
And
fasten
The facade
Weekly Theme:
Open Form Poetry
Open form poems, often still referred to as “free verse” poems, do not use regular rhythmic patterns (i.e., metric feet), are usually unrhymed, have varying line lengths, and have no set line groupings.
Well done! I set myself the goal to do a little more free verse this coming year!
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Thank you. It’s definitely a fun exercise letting rules and restrictions go.
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In the past, I would get passed mixed up with past! (Still do)
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So do I. I think there is a confusion between the different dialects of English, something that happened in the past. Maybe best just to leave the past in the past.
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I am past caring, or have I passed, caring? 😂
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Either way, caring is long gone 🤣
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🤣
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I think ‘the veil’ is my fave 🖤🖤
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I think that was one of the first I wrote for the post 😉💚
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Loved it 👍🖤
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I enjoyed reading your free verse.
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed 😊
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Some lovely micro-poetry here Mouse 💜 love these deep pieces.
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I enjoyed this post, too. My favorite was “Call me through the veil / I will walk in my sleep / To find you”. It reminds me of the time my husband and I dreamed together in the same dream. It was awesome!
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Thanks. That’s fascinating! I’ve never beard if anything like it. You must have a truly deep connection so meet subconsciously.
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A little wrong is still mostly right. Seeing that in print makes me feel better!
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It definitely helps you make allowances you wouldn’t otherwise.
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Nice! 😍💗
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Thanks 👍
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“A little wrong is still mostly right.” How reassuring☀️
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I think so. Also gets me in trouble from time to time 😏
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