passions
dark side
in us all
hate
like love
lives and breathes
saddened
that hate
inspires so many
I’m old
I
must hate
all new things
Write a Hay(na)ku about hate.
Hay(na)ku is a 3-line poem with one word in the first line, two words in the second, and three in the third. There are no restrictions beyond this.
If you are to forgive you must let go
Finally, I am ready
Years wasted and now I know
Souls wish to be free of misery
Scenes of things past, also
Sure my forgiveness will drive you crazy
Write a Harrisham Rhyme poem on the topic of forgiveness.
This form consists of a six-line rhyming stanza.
In this form, the last letter of the first word of each line
is the first letter of the first word of the next line.
Rhyming scheme : ababab.
There is no restriction on the starting letter of the first line.
No restriction upon line length or meter.
Invented by: Harrisham Minhas
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Brilliant !🤩 Thank you very much for that!!!
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Thank you for reading.
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My pleasure always!!! 😀🙏
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Shadows
In me
Want to speak
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Dictatorships
Of light
Locke them tight
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Day
And night
Twice must meet
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Great thought!
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Dawn
And dusk
Bring us piece
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It’s twice now, that you trigger my inspiration, and has me write something on my lunch break!😁
Much gratitude.🙇♂️🙏
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That’s why we write. To share and inspire. Happy to help.
I reread your poems, I think the first would be my favourite. Thanks for joining in.
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Pleasure is all mine.😃 I really love your work and eclectic style! 🙏
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Thank you. I was fighting for a long time before I realised this is how my brain works, go with it.
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My Haynaku by Billy
I
Don’t hate
Anyone except Froggie
He had an altercation with pet Froggie this morning. Your prompt just brought his hate out. I’ve explained he should thank you for this cathartic (had to explain) therapy you provided. He feels better for it now.
He also says you left a letter T out in the title…..Very observant is Billy……
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Understandable. The grudges I had with my pets were legendary.
Better out than in.glad I could of help.
You had me looking for a while for that missing t.
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Glad you located the missing T. Clever one is Billy…..
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Perhaps too clever.
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I avoid telling him he’s clever. Don’t want it going to his head……
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Wise. Children don’t much motivation.
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You hope they’re motivated in the right direction. I guess that’s the role of us parents…
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The irony of hate is that it’s not the opposite of love, but rather a level of love. You can only hate something or someone you love. Otherwise I you experience indifference.
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An astute observation. One which most front consider.
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Great poem this morning.
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Thank you 😊
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Excellent stuff.
Hate is a hat i don’t care to wear.🙂
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Thank you. Same.
Hate is for the adamant. And overly passionate children.
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Thanks mouse, like your astute comment!
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I have nuggets of sense within the nonsense.
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And I have no sense in my noggin!
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That would be a terrible place to keep it.
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😂
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Spot on!
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Thanks 😊
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Nice work Mr Mouse.
I’ll allow the encroachment on my territory for gems such as these! 😜🖤
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Don’t worry, I’ve already stepped back to my side of the fence 😉
The prompts for this hunt were a little heavier than last so I think there might be more in your neck of the woods. I apologize in advance 😜💚
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Haha! You know it’s only because I’m jealous! 😜🖤
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I don’t believe that for a second! 😜💚
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Would I lie to you? 😉🖤
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I don’t know 🤔💚
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Of course I wouldn’t.
Honest 😉🖤
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😏🤣💚
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I may sound trite but great hay(na)kus!
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🤣 thank you.
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My pleasure 😅
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Reblogged this on Black Feather Poetry and commented:
Thank you for the continuous inspiration Mouse😉 I really enjoy your eclectic creativity, and the new poetic forms you have been introducing to us recently. Catch you around, have a great day!🙏
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Thank you. I saw the post earlier. And commented there 👍
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You made me laugh at the “I’m Old” hay(na)ku and then you made me snort laugh with the Harrisham Rhyme! It is true that forgiving some people just makes them crazy! hehe!
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I’m glad to hear. There were a few more serious prompts this time around, I had to work really hard to find laughs.
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I must hate all new things
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🤣 getting old, Harley?
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Lol depends on the day
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It inspires many..unfortunately
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Unfortunately 😔
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Fact … Thanks 👍 for this….
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Nice poem with great message 🌷🙏🏾
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Thank you 😊💚
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Excellent writing 🙂🙂🌹!
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Thank you.
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🍫❤️💓❣️🌷💐 Feeling happy 😀😀 God bless you ☺️
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And you as well ☺️
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😊😀🌷❣️💓🌹👏🤗🍭
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