Haiku 3
vital is the mind
a plateau acquired taste
Latent the mind’s eye
Rapture a Mind
Rapture a mind
once lost in short
A journey to find
a kind comfort
The life worth loss
in comfort contests
Rapture a mind
once found in length
Unneedy of grind
an apparition dear meant
The ripe lifting sky
held in place by mountain delight
Rapture a mind
in a time, in a sparkle
eyes are gold mines
Rapture a mind
Where trees may move
Deeming a pattern while
on the grounds to improve
Rapture a mind
vixens gallop as horses
Snatching up such rabbits
of methods intricate
To plot a mind’s course
to adapt, to discover
Nothing less than a love
Can rapture a mind
So long confined
Weekly Theme:
Memory Lane
All poems featured this week were written when I was in my early to mid-teens.
I’ve corrected spelling and obvious grammatical errors, otherwise they remain untouched.
The Twisting Tail 
I like this one. It flowed nicely.
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Thank you. The boy had solid flow, something adults have great trouble with.
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Rapture a Mind is nice – has good flow and energy… Seems a blue print for talking one’s self into love….
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Thank you. That is a definate possibility. I don’t recall the exact meaning behind this one.
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