The darkness
is overwhelming
It surrounds
penetrates
With a spark of awareness
we understand change
Shadorma is a Spanish 6-line syllabic poem of 3/5/3/3/7/5 syllable lines respectively. Simple as that.
Weekly Theme:
Spanish Poetry Forms
Shadorma: Awareness
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Hi Mouse,
Simple and with solid imagery.
Have a great weekend,
eden
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Hi eden,
Thank you. Solid as I could with the restrictions.
Enjoy what’s left of your weekend
mouse
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Quite thought-provoking 15 words. Well done!
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Thank you.
I don’t use more if I don’t have to. Also, I wasn’t allowed to 😂
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Excellent little poem!
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Thank you 😊
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Brief and to the point. 💙🖤
This form is the easiest yet. 😂 that I might be able to do it 😉💙
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Thank you.
It seems the Spaniards made up the rules to this one on the sabbath 🤣
Have fun. I’ll be here to read it 😉💚
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This is fantastic and so relatable. Well done mr mouse. Hope you are well!
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Thank you. As well as one can be.
Nice to have you back 💚
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And my crown tilts just that little bit more… 😉
Glorious work my friend 👍🖤
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Thank you charmer.
You have nothing to worry about.
The emotion and personal touch you add to each of your posts exceeds what I am capable of posting 😉💚
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🖤🖤🖤
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I like the Shadorma. And I like your Shadorma! They are a little more anemic than a Tanka but far heftier than a haiku…
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I was thinking that. Somewhere in the middle.
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