Man makes his tunnel,
an act beyond mortal.
A cavity driven
to cheat time by portal.
Speed foremost unites
the ultimate ideals,
yet, what the depths concealed,
the price of pace reveals
Now we can warrant
value by the decree:
Destination only,
and forget the journey.
The breccbairdne is an Irish quatrain form. Here are the basic guidelines:
Quatrain (or four-line stanza) form
Five syllables in the first line; six syllables in the other three lines
Each line ends with a two-syllable word
Lines two and four rhyme.
Weekly Theme:
Irish Poetry Forms
Done with Welsh I see! Its a nice one, keep writing ♥️
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Thank you. One week. That’s all I give before I move on. I had so much fun playing with the Welsh that I might come back later this year 👍💚
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Pretty quick! You had fun playing with the Welsh mouse, wonder how they liked your idea of moving on so quickly 😉
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I have fun playing with everyone, no exclusions 😉
That’s the problem. If I want to play with everyone I have to keep moving.
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Quite philandering! Enjoy your week of Irish.
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Quite the coincidence. I wrote a poem called philandering yesterday for valentines week 😉
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I somehow have a feeling you just happened to name it that way 🙂
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I write posts 4 or 5 weeks in advance but I could definitely make something up on the spot 😉
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Oookay and what would that be 🤔
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Okay… Loading… Umm..
Here’s the thing
About philandering
Its one finger
And too many rings 😉
How’s that?
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Not bad! That did take a lot of thinking, thought you could come up with something more convincing! 🙂
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Nope 🤣 I have a small window to reply to comments. As I’m typing the kids are waking up again.
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All the dozen at once!
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🤣 Usually one at a time. They take breaks so I don’t.
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I do like this poem and the form is surprisingly easy (at least compared to some of the Welsh forms).
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The two syllable line endings had me. The Irish has some tricks to it. You’ll see by the end of the week 😉
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Enjoyed this, trying to build a mental tunnel to continue journey. 😉💙 you are the syllable master. 😁 welsh did ya ‘n huh?
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Thank you 💚 I’m still just practicing. A lifetime as an apprentice.
I couldn’t imagine writing these in Welsh 🤣 I honestly think it could melt your face off from excursion.
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🤣
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You’re too good for us Mr Mouse, too good. This one is great 👍🖤
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Nobody has ever said about me before and I doubt anyone ever will again. I’m taking a screenshot to prove it happened 😊💚
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Best back it up too for good measure! 🤣😉🖤
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Done! On a hard drive, sent it as an email to myself along with all my friends and family 🤣💚
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Excellent!! 😁😁🖤
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Nice blog!
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Thank you.
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