What’s wrong with me
That you can
Hurt me with the truth
Yet I find comfort in your lies
Are we doomed
When good and bad are so easily
Blurred and interchangeable
Are we hardwired
For safety in the present at any cost
What does this say about
Our future
Emotions are a fucked up thing
I spoke with a fellow blogger recently about editing. I myself, edit like crazy.
He said he occasional writes directly to his blog with little to no editing and suggested I try the same.
So, this week I’ll be posting material that I’ve given myself about 15 minutes to write and haven’t edited other than glaring spelling and grammatical mistakes.
Fifteen minutes well spent!
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Thank you. I had nothing for almost ten minutes. Then a last minute rush. I had no idea where to go after the last line and ran out of time.
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Is there a name for this form? The first stanza is powerful and is what gets too many into relationship difficulties.
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Thank you. No form, brain spew if I had to name it. 15 minutes on the clock, whatever comes out. Truth and lies and the line between, always shifting.
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Yes they are a fucked up thing, is the alternative better? š¤Ø
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I don’t know. I need another 15 minutes to figure it out šš
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This is great.
I think timed writing is suiting you my friend šš¤
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Thank you. This week only for now. I have the rest of the year planned. Maybe I’ll do part 2 next year if I’m still around.
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Thank you. This week only for now. I have the rest of the year planned. Maybe I’ll do part 2 next year if I’m still aroundšš
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You’d better be!! š³šš¤
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Okay ššš
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Wow!
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Thanks!
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